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This is my Slideshow about camp we went to a camp at Mt Ruapehu to go Skiing and Snowboarding,
I was in the Green group with Janna and Roque. The bus drive was so long it felt like I almost got older by a year! The first stop was the Hamilton Gardens we had lunch and did challenges it was amazing and they have about 1 million visitors a year amazing right! The next stop was Otorahonga We had more Lunch then went to the exhibit around the corner it was also amazing I loved the milk one most. Then the next stop was The Park the park is the Hotel we stayed in the first night we had lasagna Yummmmm! then Pudding it was Brownie. Then straight to bed to eat Lollies! Overall I loved it. We went skiing for two days and did a night walk the first night. Then the saddest part was the drive back I still miss it so so sad...
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Hi Max, Amaya here. I really like the way you told us what you did in a descriptive way and how you told us what group your in. Have you thought about Writing a reflection at the end about the snow.
ReplyDeleteNice job Max, you have put a lot of effort into your slideshow. It is great to hear you enjoyed spending time with your friends and making new friends as well as spending time on the mountain. I enjoyed watching you negotiate Rock Garden with your new skills. You did very well! I like the long reflection at the end of your slideshow. What was the hardest thing to learn on your skiis? I think you could have added a lot more adjectives and verbs to describe the activities we did. Keep up the great work.
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