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Friday, June 23, 2017

Skateboarding Poem

So much fun!
Knee pads, safety gear.
Aiden helping us to skate.
Teaching us to push off the board.
Each and every one enjoying ourselves.
Boarding down the lazy court.
Other class’s having fun too.
Aiden and Martin, cool dudes.
Riding a penny board first day.
Doing skateboarding and improving.






Welcome blogging world!
This is our schools Skateboarding Lessons. We have all done a poem, This is my poem hope you enjoy and comment and share with your friends please leave a helpful and thoughtful comment. We learnt how to do all kinds of stuff like how to tick tak and go up ramps how to push of skateboard and put the gear on  it was really fun. Blog you later
Max Mc






2 comments:

  1. Hey there Max, this is Serene, from next door. I really liked the post about skateboarding poem. Really liked how you put the pictures to make it more eye catching. Your poem was cool. I think it just needs a bit more writing about How you felt when you were skateboarding. Overall I think its good. Check out my blog at http://wpsserenec.blogspot.co.nz/ if you don't know it (which will be disappointing) Bye!

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  2. Hi Max,
    I bet skateboarding was really fun because i have skateboard and i skateboard. your acrostic poem is really nice I like how you used describing words in there like the lazy court and how you used every letter to match the subject.

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