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Friday, May 12, 2017

Anzac Day 2017 ( at the zoo )

This is a story that I did on they day we will remember! (Anzac Day)
we had to write about our Anzac Day in class hope you enjoy the story and feel free to leave a comment!!!

Beep! One Tuesday morning I woke up from my beeping alarm at 8:27 and slowly open my eyes to see it’s the holidays The I go into the kitchen and see my Cousin on the couch with my Auntie and Uncle and two Cousins I guessed that Mum and Dad was still asleep in bed ether awake or asleep they said that they might go to the zoo to have a look at the animals for Arlo my little Cousin. “How long will it take.” asked Kahu about 10 minutes by car “OK” said Kahu.


When we got there in about 14 minutes we went straight into the action by speed walking to the zoo we went quite slow because my 3 year old Cousin Arlo. Kahu and Me kind of ran up to this shiny black car it made us look so stubby it was funny it took them a while to catch up. When we made it to the front door we were looking at the pictures of the other people who didn’t buy their photos some of them were interesting the rest weren't. Next we went to the giraffes they were quite boring we saw the tortoise off in the distance over there looked like baby ones so we went over but first bumped into a meerkat, They were cool one of the was actually sitting down with it’s back on the tree stump. When we went passed all of the animals like Elephants, Turtles,  Zebras, Rino’s finally we got to the cafe shop there were hot chips smoothies milkshake and much more I walked in the line with Ice cream. Of in the distance I saw Kahu and Arlo watching the Elephant.”Tap! “Tap! I swung around and then I froze it was my coach Jo but his real name is Joseph Dawkins “Hi” I said he replied the same he asked me a few questions and left I got my ice cream and rushed of to Kahu and Arlo. Next we went over to the Lions “Wow” they were cool I loved them but only one moved I loved there shiny fur and strong legs. Then after a while we went over to the servals we saw heaps of rats in all the cages. When we went through all the birds like Kea, Tui’s and more after the Birds were the Monkey they were awesome they were my favourite after awhile we decided to leave when we walked out of the door one of the zookeeper gave us our photos we turned them down like many other parents.

When we were on our way home Arlo feel asleep as I read him a book called upside down rabbits he slept very easily on the way home. When we got home me and Kahu went down stairs and watched a movie.

From Max

1 comment:

  1. Great to hear you spent your Anzac Day with family Max. I love visiting the Auckland Zoo, especially with a big group, it is always fun. I think my favourite parts are where you can walk through and see the animals up close. Your writing needs some more editing. There are a few places you could add in full stops and capital letters. Look forward to reading more of your 'tales'.

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