Friday, May 12, 2017
The Tooth!
Hello and Welcome!
Today we have been reading a book called the tooth it's about a boy show mum died and he found a tooth before he found the shore so it is a mystery book and it is very cool I will suggest it. It is a book by des hunt the author.
From Max
Dear diary!
Hello blogging world!
Today we have been doing senses and we used them while at war in my work today this is my war diary hope you enjoy!!
WALT describe using our senses
I think I did OK I also think I could have done a little bit more but i'm happy with the concept of the diary. The senses were see, Hear, Taste, Smell, Feel, Feeling, Thinking. Feel free to leave a helpful positive comment.
By Max Mc
Today we have been doing senses and we used them while at war in my work today this is my war diary hope you enjoy!!
I can see the bullet shells dropping on in the wet diseased mud and old rats the size of cats and I can see black smoke smudged across people's faces, Trench feet rotting everywhere in the trenches.
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I can hear the bullets dropping as well as the shells clinking as it hits the ground hard and the screams of people yelling as they are dying from big thick smoke or guns, When you are in the trenches you can become death and not even alive.
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I can taste the smoke and plum juice and blood as the bitter rain falling on my tongue there are shells exploding left right and centre as my teeth chatter in the sluky trenches.
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I can smell the smoke from the trenches and the gas through in by the Germans as I am ducking over and under everything that comes flying at me although I hear screams they seem to fade away into my imagination and the bitter air I can smell the most.
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I can feel the mud the sluk and much more as the blood is mixed onto my hands in this weather I don't think no one can survive this horrid war the feeling I just can’t take it any more.
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My heart is beating as I am crying not to die I can feel my heart beating through my chest and past my ribs tears drop down my face but the smell overtakes the crying and then the beating of my heart does. It is all madness my heart is saying through the flesh and blood of humans.
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I am thinking in my heart I am going to die I’m scared that I haven't had enough training for this war at all in my mind I am dead.
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I think I did OK I also think I could have done a little bit more but i'm happy with the concept of the diary. The senses were see, Hear, Taste, Smell, Feel, Feeling, Thinking. Feel free to leave a helpful positive comment.
By Max Mc
Thursday, May 4, 2017
Who Looks At my Blog?
Welcome back!
Welcome back to my learning. Today in my class room we did a google drawing on who visits our blog? and put down who came to mind first.

I know a lot of people who can visit my blog but theses came to my mind first!
I think it was easy because I have done this before.
Feel free to leave a helpful comment!!
Welcome back to my learning. Today in my class room we did a google drawing on who visits our blog? and put down who came to mind first.
I know a lot of people who can visit my blog but theses came to my mind first!
I think it was easy because I have done this before.
Feel free to leave a helpful comment!!
Wednesday, May 3, 2017
Hi I'm back from holiday
Hello again bloggers I am back in 2017 hope you are all still in tune with me and my blog.
I am looking forward to posting more learning with you in 2017!
Blog You Later
Max Mc
I am looking forward to posting more learning with you in 2017!
Blog You Later
Max Mc
Toys.
in class we have been doing a thing link on our inquiry we were doing electricity to make a toy enjoy.
Project War
Monday, December 12, 2016
My Last Post
Hi There Blogging world,
Thank you for coming to visit my learning blog. this will be my last blog because I am on holiday. I have enjoyed this blog to share my learning with you all. I hope you have enjoyed reading about my learning to.
Blog You Later.
Max Mc
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